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		<title>Common Web Copywriting Objections</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Feb 2012 08:30:23 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jamie</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Having worked with many SEO and web design agencies, I&#8217;ve heard a lot of client objections to going ahead with copywriting. I&#8217;ve shared some of these below, together with a brief explanation of how they can be addressed. We can write the copy ourselves Yes, but do you know how to blend text that not [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div>Having worked with many SEO and web design agencies, I&#8217;ve heard a lot of client objections to going ahead with copywriting.</div>
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<div>I&#8217;ve shared some of these below, together with a brief explanation of how they can be addressed.</div>
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<li><strong>We can write the copy ourselves</strong></li>
</ul>
<p>Yes, but do you know how to blend text that not only gets your website ranked higher in the search engines but also encourages more sales/enquiries?</p>
<p>Would you send someone from your accounts department to try to sell to your most important client?</p>
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<li><strong>We don’t have the budget for web copywriting</strong></li>
</ul>
<p>Okay, who’s going to write it then; your sales manager on £50 upwards per hour? One of the firm’s Directors?</p>
<p>There’s a cost to your business whoever does your copywriting. Savvy companies pay for a professional copywriter to get it right first time.</p>
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<li><strong>No one knows our business like we do</strong></li>
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<p>Of course, but who are you selling to? Your customers don’t know your business like you do, and nor do they want to.</p>
<p>Potential clients want to know what’s in it for them – why should they choose your company/buy your products?</p>
<p>A professional copywriter doesn’t try to sell your ethos, company history, or even features of what you do – they will cut straight to the point and tell your target market what the benefits are.</p>
<ul>
<li><strong>We don’t want to deal with yet another supplier</strong></li>
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<p>We understand that, but the relationship between you and the copywriter doesn’t have to exist. We can deal with everything for you to make sure your finished website is complete and ready to drive new business from the day it’s launched.</p>
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<li><strong>What if we don’t like what’s been written?</strong></li>
</ul>
<p>Our copywriting quotes include two sets of revisions if necessary. We’ve never had a client ever need more than two sets of changes to the text we’ve supplied.</p>
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<li><strong>What if it holds up our web project?</strong></li>
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<p>Professional copywriters do their job day in day out. It will be quicker for us to liaise with someone whose sole focus is on producing your content.</p>
<p>The alternative is having someone in-house having to juggle the content with their existing role, and not having the expertise or confidence to produce quality content quickly.</p>
<p><span style="color: #003366;"><strong>Great design is only one half of the big picture. When it&#8217;s combined with effective copy, your clients will reap the benefits, and your own reputation will grow. </strong></span></p>
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<p><strong>Image credit: <a title="Osaka19" href="http://www.everystockphoto.com/photographer.php?photographer_id=115021" target="_blank">osaka19</a></strong></p>
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		<title>Web Designers – Don’t Let Late Content Affect Your Cash Flow</title>
		<link>http://oceancopy.co.uk/2012/01/web-designers-late-content-cash-flow/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jan 2012 20:50:21 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jamie</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Having worked with and spoken to many web designers over the last few years, I know how frustrating and damaging late content can be. Do any of these scenarios sound familiar? You’ve finished the site but there’s no content. You don’t get paid the final balance until the website goes live. Your client has promised [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Having worked with and spoken to many web designers over the last few years, I know how frustrating and damaging late content can be.</p>
<p><a href="http://oceancopy.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/bank-firm-rate-7522-l.jpg"><img class=" wp-image-251 alignright" title="bank-firm-rate-7522-l" src="http://oceancopy.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/bank-firm-rate-7522-l.jpg" alt="Cash flow" width="180" height="130" /></a></p>
<p>Do any of these scenarios sound familiar?</p>
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<li><strong>You’ve finished the site but there’s no content. </strong></li>
<li><strong>You don’t get paid the final balance until the website goes live. </strong></li>
<li><strong>Your client has promised the content many times and hasn’t delivered it.</strong></li>
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<p>Cash flow and time are important in any business.</p>
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<p>If a client delays supplying their copy, you don’t get paid the balance on time, and the chances are they’ll choose to send it just when you’ve immersed yourself in a new project.</p>
<p>So, how do you get around this common web design problem?</p>
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<li><strong>Work out a figure your client is potentially losing every day in lost online sales/enquiries and tell them what it is.</strong></li>
<li><strong>Tell your client you know a professional copywriter who can turn their project around quickly and to a high standard.</strong></li>
<li><strong>Ask your client how much it’s costing them to have a member of their in-house write the content in terms of an hourly rate. </strong></li>
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<p>What client would say no to a 24/7 sales force that required no monthly salary, no commission, and no bonuses that could start right away?</p>
<p>A professionally written website is a hassle-free, round-the-clock sales/lead generator for your clients. And as soon as their site is live with content that sells, the sooner it can start making a positive return for them.</p>
<p><strong>Professional copywriting can kill two birds with one stone &#8211; you get paid quicker and your client doesn’t miss out on days/weeks/months of lost online sales.</strong></p>
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<p><strong>Find out more about our web copywriting services. </strong></p>
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		<title>How I Became a Web Copywriter</title>
		<link>http://oceancopy.co.uk/2011/12/how-i-became-a-web-copywriter/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Dec 2011 13:39:58 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jamie</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[As a web copywriter, I know people like reading stories, so here is my tale of how I came to write websites and articles for clients all over the world. At Primary School I had a fantastic teacher called Mrs. Russell who encouraged me to write and be creative. This resulted in me winning a [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As a web copywriter, I know people like reading stories, so here is my tale of how I came to write websites and articles for clients all over the world.</p>
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<li>At Primary School I had a fantastic teacher called Mrs. Russell who encouraged me to write and be creative. This resulted in me winning a BBC Radio Scotland competition for my entry “Jack the Bucketman”.</li>
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<li>I studied <strong>Graphic Communications Management at Napier University</strong> in Edinburgh after leaving High School.</li>
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<li>I then worked for a few different printing companies in and around Edinburgh on the production side.</li>
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<li>My career then took me to the production department of a student promotions &amp; publishing company. It was here my passion for writing and marketing was reignited. I was involved in <strong>email marketing campaigns for students</strong> as well as <strong>writing restaurant reviews</strong> for some great, and not so great eating establishments in Edinburgh.</li>
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<li>One day I saw an advert on Gumtree from a global digital agency with an office in Edinburgh looking for copywriters. I wrote some sample text and got accepted. Within a couple of months they were offering me more work than I could fit around my day job.</li>
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<li>Thanks to the support of my wife, I quit my ‘day job’ and took up copywriting full time. The agency I mentioned above kept me in work for quite a while, including <strong>writing around 100 websites for one of the world’s biggest hotel chains.</strong></li>
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<li>The financial crisis hit and outsourcing work to copywriters was seen as an unnecessary expense, so the agency work dried up. I immediately sent out a mailshot and got around five or six good clients within a week or two (some of whom I still work for now). It was around this time I set up Ocean Copy.</li>
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<p><strong>If you’re a copywriter, it would be great to read your story in the comments below.  </strong></p>
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		<title>SEO Content Writing – 5 Quick Mistakes to Avoid</title>
		<link>http://oceancopy.co.uk/2011/11/seo-content-writing-five-quick-mistakes-avoid/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Nov 2011 15:03:37 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jamie</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Writing for the search engines, or SEO content writing is a minefield if you don’t know what you’re doing. Forgetting that the web is primarily used by humans looking for information is a huge mistake. Since the Google Panda update, most of the truly awful SEO content has been given the back-handed slap it deserved. [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Writing for the search engines, or SEO content writing is a minefield if you don’t know what you’re doing.</p>
<p><a href="http://oceancopy.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/everystockphoto-162191-m1.jpg"><img class="size-full wp-image-228 alignright" title="everystockphoto-162191-m" src="http://oceancopy.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/everystockphoto-162191-m1.jpg" alt="" width="180" height="118" /></a></p>
<p>Forgetting that the web is primarily used by humans looking for information is a huge mistake.</p>
<p>Since the <a title="Google Panda Update" href="http://www.infusionblog.com/technology/googles-panda-update-explained-in-laymens-terms/" target="_blank">Google Panda update</a>, most of the truly awful SEO content has been given the back-handed slap it deserved. This hasn’t stopped many reputable and not so reputable businesses continuing to churn out poor content though.</p>
<p>Below are <strong>five quick mistakes to avoid</strong> when it comes to SEO content;</p>
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<li><strong>Keyword stuffing</strong></li>
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<p>So you run a mobile disco in Cardiff do you? Yes, I know that and am starting to get annoyed because you’ve told me you run a mobile disco in Cardiff at least five or six times in one paragraph, and if I ever need a mobile disco in Cardiff, I’m highly unlikely to choose your mobile disco in Cardiff. Get it?</p>
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<li><strong>Writing without thinking </strong></li>
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<p>Quality content is more important than ever. Why just churn out an article saying the same things as everyone else? Taking the time to do some keyword research and think about your topic from a different angle can help improve its relevance to your target audience, and relevance is king.</p>
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<li><strong>Rewriting articles you found online</strong></li>
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<p>Who will ever notice if you take an article written by someone else, change a few headings and pass it off as your own work? Google for one will notice and you might also get a nice email or call from the person you’ve ripped off too.</p>
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<li><strong>Spammy meta tags</strong></li>
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<p>Cramming your <a title="Meta Tags" href="http://oceancopy.co.uk/2011/04/meta-tags-matter/" target="_blank">meta title and description</a> full of keywords is old hat and spammy. Google only really needs told once that you run a mobile disco in Cardiff in your meta title and description, repeating the same thing until you run out of space lacks imagination. You’re also missing an opportunity to entice people to click through to your site from the search engine results.</p>
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<li><strong>Repeating these mistakes over and over again</strong></li>
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<p>If you’ve been making the four mistakes listed above for days, weeks, months or even years, then please stop.</p>
<p>The rules of SEO content have changed. Don’t keep throwing good money at a cheap copywriter that doesn’t know what they’re doing, or spend hours wondering why your rankings are still rubbish.</p>
<p><strong>While the term SEO content is used a lot, remember you’re trying to make a connection with human beings when you publish web pages or articles online. </strong></p>
<p><strong>Don’t just write a load of generalised information crammed with keywords; think about what people might actually want to read. </strong></p>
<p><strong>SEO content is as easy as, well, SEO;</strong></p>
<p><strong>Specific, Engaging &amp; Original. </strong></p>
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		<title>How to Brand Yourself Online</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Nov 2011 21:46:55 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jamie</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[People ‘Google’ everything nowadays and that includes names of potential clients, suppliers and job applicants. It definitely pays to do a search on your own name every so often to see what others are saying about you online. If you find something bad, you’ll want to take immediate action; this could be asking a site [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>People ‘Google’ everything nowadays and that includes names of potential clients, suppliers and job applicants.</p>
<p>It definitely pays to do a search on your own name every so often to <strong>see what others are saying about you online.</strong></p>
<p>If you find something bad, you’ll want to take immediate action; this could be asking a site owner to remove libellous content, or populating the search engine results with more positive information.</p>
<p>If you ‘Google’ yourself and find nothing, you should still take action. As Oscar Wilde said <strong><em>“The only thing worse than being talked about is not being talked about.”</em></strong></p>
<p><a href="http://oceancopy.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/1013679_people_series.jpg"><img class="size-thumbnail wp-image-218 alignright" title="Stand out online" src="http://oceancopy.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/1013679_people_series-150x150.jpg" alt="Brand yourself" width="150" height="150" /></a></p>
<p>So, how do you go about ‘branding’ yourself online? Below are five simple steps.</p>
<p>1)      <strong>Create a personal blog</strong> and fill it with positive content about who you are, your achievements, work history and anything else that portrays you in a positive light.</p>
<p>2)      <strong>Guest blog – </strong>approach authoritative websites in your sector and ask if you can write regular blogs for them. In return your online profile will get a boost, especially if you get an anchor text link for your name pointing back to your own blog.</p>
<p>3)      <strong>Start a LinkedIn group –</strong> get some discussions going around your industry and topics affecting it, and your name will soon become known in wider circles for all the right reasons. If you’re looking for a job, this is also a great way to get noticed by potential employers.</p>
<p>4)      <strong>Get tweeting –</strong> the chances are that most of the influential people in your industry or companies looking to recruit will have a Twitter presence. It’s easy to interact with people on this popular social media platform, and if your blog posts get retweeted, who knows who might end up reading them?</p>
<p>5)      <strong>Spread the word</strong> – there are many social bookmarking sites online where you can place links to your content to give it a wider audience. These links may then be tweeted or commented on by others; raising your online profile for free.</p>
<p>SEO and copywriting have a major part to play in branding yourself online. If you don’t have these skills yourself or the time to learn them, outsource your blogging or guest blogs to someone else.</p>
<p><strong>What’s the web saying about you and do you really want others to read it?</strong></p>
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		<title>SEO Copywriting Glossary</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 10 Oct 2011 10:07:50 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jamie</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[In order to explain some of the terms used on this site, I’ve compiled a small SEO Copywriting Glossary. Anchor text links Anchor text links are the words you use to link out from one website page to another. This could be on your own website or an external website. In terms of SEO, it’s [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In order to explain some of the terms used on this site, I’ve compiled a small SEO Copywriting Glossary.</p>
<p><strong>Anchor text links</strong></p>
<p>Anchor text links are the words you use to link out from one website page to another. This could be on your own website or an external website.</p>
<p>In terms of SEO, it’s best to incorporate your keyword(s) into your anchor text links where possible i.e. <strong>“website copywriter”</strong> rather than <strong>“click here”</strong>.</p>
<p><strong>Calls to action</strong></p>
<p>Calls to action are instructions for people looking at your website. For example, if you’d like them to call you or order online, you need to ask them to take action i.e. <strong>“Call us now to arrange a free quote”.</strong></p>
<p>It’s no good just randomly throwing calls to action into your website text, you should build up to the point where people have enough information to order or get in touch.</p>
<p><strong>Keyword research</strong></p>
<p>Keyword research is critical for any website. If you choose keywords your target audience isn’t typing into Google, they won’t find you.</p>
<p>Choosing realistic and relevant keywords is a must for online ranking success.</p>
<p><strong>Meta descriptions</strong></p>
<p>The meta description tag is the two lines of text underneath the main title in the search results. The meta description should be unique for each page of your website and include relevant keywords as well as enticing people to click through to your website.<strong></strong></p>
<p><strong>Meta titles</strong></p>
<p>The meta title appears in people’s browser bars (top left) and as the main title in bold on the search engine results.</p>
<p>Your meta titles should include your chosen keywords/phrases and be unique for each website page. <strong></strong></p>
<p><strong>U – URL</strong></p>
<p>URL is short for Uniform Resource Locator and is your website page address i.e.  http://www.oceancopy.co.uk is the URL for our homepage.</p>
<p><a href="http://oceancopy.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2011/03/iStock_000008023239XSmall.jpg"><img class="size-thumbnail wp-image-55 alignleft" title="Blue arrow" src="http://oceancopy.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2011/03/iStock_000008023239XSmall-150x150.jpg" alt="Get in touch" width="90" height="90" /></a></p>
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<p><strong><a title="Contact a Copywriter" href="http://oceancopy.co.uk/contact-ocean-copy/">Contact us </a>now to discuss your copywriting project. </strong></p>
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		<title>Hire a Copywriter and Hit the Jackpot</title>
		<link>http://oceancopy.co.uk/2011/09/hire-copywriter-jackpot/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Sep 2011 15:45:35 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jamie</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Around six months ago I had a gap in my copywriting schedule so decided to do some Pay per Click (PPC) advertising. I researched some long tail keywords (think longer phrases rather than individual words) with a low cost per click and off I went with my very limited budget. The result was I spent [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://oceancopy.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/1224071_70299485.jpg"><img class="alignright size-medium wp-image-181" title="Money" src="http://oceancopy.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/1224071_70299485-300x200.jpg" alt="Jackpot" width="300" height="200" /></a>Around six months ago I had a gap in my copywriting schedule so decided to do some Pay per Click (PPC) advertising.</p>
<p>I researched some long tail keywords (think longer phrases rather than individual words) with a low cost per click and off I went with my very limited budget.</p>
<p>The result was <strong>I spent £20 </strong>which has so far <strong>generated me over £1000</strong> worth of ongoing work from two clients.</p>
<p><strong>PPC is dead?</strong></p>
<p>I find it funny when people say PPC is dead because it’s too expensive. There are still lots of long tail phrases out there which don’t cost the earth.</p>
<p>There was a decent amount of competition for the phrase I advertised on, so why did these two clients choose me?</p>
<p>Was it pure chance or were they attracted to my PPC advert text and convinced by the copy they read on my website?</p>
<p><strong>Think about your own business; would some words written by a professional help you stand out and win new clients? </strong></p>
<p><strong>You could find out by <a title="Contact Us" href="http://oceancopy.co.uk/contact-ocean-copy/" target="_blank">contacting us</a> now or maybe just do nothing and hope for the best. </strong></p>
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		<title>Please Read This Blog Post</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Sep 2011 22:24:38 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jamie</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Way back in the olden days when I was starting out as a copywriter, I was told by an agency not to use the word ‘please’ in my copy. The reason I was given for this was that ‘please’ sounded desperate. I was using it sparingly and of course if I’d written “please please pretty [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Way back in the olden days when I was starting out as a copywriter, I was told by an agency not to use the word ‘please’ in my copy.</p>
<p><a href="http://oceancopy.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/please-2.gif"><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-168" title="please-2" src="http://oceancopy.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/please-2.gif" alt="Please emoticon" width="83" height="83" /></a></p>
<p>The reason I was given for this was that ‘please’ sounded desperate. I was using it sparingly and of course if I’d written <strong><em>“please please pretty please buy our stuff”</em></strong> I would have completely understood.</p>
<p>Is there anything wrong with writing something like <strong><em>“Please get in touch now for a quick quote?”</em></strong></p>
<p>My opinion is manners do have a place in website text when used correctly, but am I right?</p>
<p>If you translate this into the ‘real world’ and buying from shops, how would you feel if a sales assistant said <strong><em>“can you buy this washing machine please?”</em></strong> Would you consider this to be good manners or too pushy?</p>
<p><strong>What do you think? Please leave your comments below (see it doesn’t sound too bad does it?)</strong></p>
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		<title>Don&#8217;t Upset the Rhythm</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Aug 2011 20:35:08 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jamie</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[When you’re writing copy, do you jot it down without reading it aloud? If so, it’s time you paid heed to the copywriting advice dished out by The Noisettes; “Don&#8217;t upset the rhythm, don&#8217;t you dare (Go baby, go baby GO!) Don&#8217;t upset the rhythm” Okay, maybe the “Go baby, go baby Go!” part isn’t [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When you’re writing copy, do you jot it down without reading it aloud?</p>
<p>If so, it’s time you paid heed to the copywriting advice dished out by The Noisettes;</p>
<p><strong>“Don&#8217;t upset the rhythm, don&#8217;t you dare (Go baby, go baby GO!) Don&#8217;t upset the rhythm”</strong></p>
<p>Okay, maybe the “Go baby, go baby Go!” part isn’t that relevant.</p>
<p><a href="http://oceancopy.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/376707_2792.jpg"><img class="alignright size-medium wp-image-158" title="Rhythm" src="http://oceancopy.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/376707_2792-300x200.jpg" alt="Guitar Player" width="300" height="200" /></a></p>
<p>However, there are many reasons you shouldn’t upset the rhythm of your writing;</p>
<ul>
<li>Writing without rhythm is <strong>harder to read</strong></li>
<li>If people have problems reading      your text they will <strong>leave your site</strong></li>
<li>If people leave your site      quickly <strong>your online sales will      suffer</strong></li>
</ul>
<p>Here are a few quick tips to keep the flow and rhythm of your writing on track;</p>
<p><strong>1) </strong><strong>Try to keep your sentences a similar length</strong></p>
<p><strong>2) </strong><strong>Don’t throw long words into sentences full of short words</strong></p>
<p><strong>3) </strong><strong>Avoid long-winded paragraphs with no gaps to break up the text</strong></p>
<p><strong>4) </strong><strong>Where appropriate, use a sprinkling of alliteration</strong></p>
<p><strong>5) </strong><strong>Read and amend what you’ve written until it ‘sings’ </strong></p>
<p>Now is the time for the rest of The Noisette’s advice; go baby go baby go!</p>
<p><strong>Print out this article and use it to check your website text for rhythm today. </strong></p>
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<p><strong>Image Credit: <a title="iotdfi" href="http://www.sxc.hu/profile/iotdfi" target="_blank">iotdfi</a><br />
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		<title>Are Straplines Really that Important?</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Aug 2011 11:49:22 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jamie</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[First of all, what do I mean by the term “strapline”? It’s the little bit of text usually displayed under a logo or mentioned on radio ads that’s supposed to stick in the minds of your customers and act as a hook. Here are a few well known examples: Coca Cola – Coke is it [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>First of all, what do I mean by the term “strapline”? It’s the little bit of text usually displayed under a logo or mentioned on radio ads that’s supposed to stick in the minds of your customers and act as a hook.</p>
<p><a href="http://oceancopy.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/1083257_44995937.jpg"><img class="alignright size-thumbnail wp-image-135" title="1083257_44995937" src="http://oceancopy.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/1083257_44995937-150x150.jpg" alt="Notepad" width="150" height="150" /></a></p>
<p>Here are a few well known examples:</p>
<ul>
<li><strong>Coca Cola</strong> – Coke is it</li>
<li><strong>Nike</strong> – Just do it</li>
<li><strong>McDonalds</strong> – I’m lovin’ it</li>
</ul>
<p>And one not so well known:</p>
<ul>
<li><strong>Ocean Copy</strong> – Clear fresh writing</li>
</ul>
<p><strong>A closer look</strong></p>
<p>As you’ll see from the famous examples above, the word ‘it’ appears at the end. This approach may work for global brands such as these when the customer is already aware what ‘it’ is they’re selling but would this work as well for a smaller company?</p>
<p>For example if I changed my own strapline to <strong>‘Clear fresh writing is it’</strong> what would your reaction be? If I read that as an outsider my first thought would be <strong>‘is what?’</strong></p>
<p><strong>Stick or twist?</strong></p>
<p>Another consideration when it comes to straplines is do you keep yours the same for eternity or change it once in a while?</p>
<p>A well known electrical retailer in the UK seems to favour the latter approach. Here are a few of their recent straplines;</p>
<ul>
<li><strong>We live electricals</strong></li>
<li><strong>You know where to come</strong></li>
<li><strong>We deal in your ideal</strong></li>
</ul>
<p>Personally, I don’t like any of these and I guess the company concerned didn’t like them too much either since they decided to change them, or perhaps it&#8217;s because they&#8217;re in a fast-paced industry and want to make sure their brand is always seen to be evolving?</p>
<p><span style="color: #003366;">What do you think &#8211; are generic straplines only for bigger companies? and once you’ve found a great strapline, should you keep it or change it to help keep your brand fresh?</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #003366;">Any comments are welcome below; I’m off to think of a new strapline for Ocean Copy!</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #003366;"><strong><span style="color: #000000;">Image Credit: <a title="Ilco" href="http://www.sxc.hu/profile/ilco" target="_blank">Ilco</a></span></strong><br />
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